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Thy mouth so wise as an elder
yet thy heart so weak as a new born child
What is to become of thee?
With passion and desire
For the longing of death and chaos
Tis not all but merely a Satan's dream dreamt
Thou art overcome by the darkness
Hence in the shadows of the unknown
has taken over thee
But
I who laid eyes on thee
O what purity, what beauty!
I see deep inside the depths of thy soul
O what sadness, what grief!
I see that lays on the expression of thy face
Must you be full of joy and happiness
As well as all the other mortals in thine world
If I were to choose, I wilt help bring a smile on thy face
But
To ask of all this,
This is too much to ask, even for the Lord
Is it not?
©2004-2009 ~IntoDeep
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I was one of those Shakespearean mood

I do not own the Image above^^^ Sorry who ever owns this, if this is yours please note me or tell me that its yours so i can give full credit to you.

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:icondarthmarlan:
Interesting tone of writing, and rather interesting piece also. =)
:iconintodeep:
Thank you :) :)

--
Let's jump upon the sharp swords
And cut away our smiles
Without the threat of Death
There's no reason to live at all

- The Reflecting God by Marilyn Manson

:blackrose: ~drowninsanity ~sinfulxxtears :blackrose:
:icondarthmarlan:
You're very welcome. =D=D=D
:iconvibes:
Sounds like a play ... nice!
:iconintodeep:
heh thanx

--
Let's jump upon the sharp swords
And cut away our smiles
Without the threat of Death
There's no reason to live at all

- The Reflecting God by Marilyn Manson

:blackrose: ~drowninsanity ~sinfulxxtears :blackrose:
:icontakodavega:
Wow, that's a great write! Keep up the good work ^^

--
"Hmm, so the god of death has a sense of humor, that or he's senile...or both." ~ Takoda Vega, Tattered Wings

"Good news is always good. Good noose depends on the context." `darkcrescendo
:iconintodeep:
thanx

--
Let's jump upon the sharp swords
And cut away our smiles
Without the threat of Death
There's no reason to live at all

- The Reflecting God by Marilyn Manson

:blackrose: ~drowninsanity ~sinfulxxtears :blackrose:
:iconmysticavora:
Mwahhhh! I LOVE IT! --->You should have shown me sooner! :glomp: ---> I love your shakespear mood! :glomp: It's the perfect thing..It soooo goes with my pic! :love: I love it--> ( this is a really awesome --b/c I really ususally don't know what to say to poems..but w/ this one I got all bubblie inside... O_o ) I think it has to do with ---> historical-like romanticism. :glomp: Thanks for showing me!!

:dance: :dance: :dance: :!:
:iconintodeep:
:hug: :hug: :hug:

thanks a lot for the :+fav: and the comment. I appreciate it very much. :glomp:

--
Let's jump upon the sharp swords
And cut away our smiles
Without the threat of Death
There's no reason to live at all

- The Reflecting God by Marilyn Manson

:blackrose: ~drowninsanity ~sinfulxxtears :blackrose:

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